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Wednesday, October 16, 2013

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The Race Day
Today was the day of the big race. I get my gear. I put my car on the trailer then we shoot off to the race.
Finally we get to the race. I get all my gear on. Suddenly the guy in the tower said the race starts in one minute so I get in the car.
The red light turned to green. I was versing Carne.I told my team mate we were going one hundred miles per hour. We were going through town. They will never catch up.
Yes! We won. In first place its..... Zach's team. My car is as fast as a rocket.
Time to go home.
By Zach

When I grow up.
As the foot swerves you could feel the wind of the muddy sticky ball. The sweaty stress ran down my face. Goal!
You can guess what I want to be when I grow up. Can you? I'll give you three clues. They're as slick as a burglar.
Clue 1. It's a well known sport. As good as Sonny Bill Williams with his footy with the Roosters, and no it's not rugby. The ball is a hedgehog man.
Clue 2. You are even able to play this on the Queen's front lawn,
"but do not break the windows" she said.
Clue 3. The ball is black and white. The word on it is FIFA.
Can you guess what I want to be when I grow up? Yes, a soccer player.
By Xavier

1 comment:

  1. So neat to see your amazing stories Zach and Xavier. I like the way you use similes like famous authors and you use interesting words to draw the audience in! Thank you. Keep up the good work! Mrs. Trewin

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