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Wednesday, April 29, 2015


We are learning to write instructions

How to arrive at school

It is a nice sunny day and you have arrived at school. But what will be your next step?
Step one. Go inside. To go inside you need to open the door into the hallway. When you are inside, walk quietly.
Step two. Walk to the cloak bay. You need to take off your bag and hang your bag on your hook.
Step three. Hang your bag quietly and then walk to your classroom and quietly go inside.
Step four. Do not make noise so that the people who are doing their work will not be disturbed. Listen to the teachers instructions.
If you follow there instructions you will be the best kid in the whole school.

By Adina
It is a fabulous morning, so what are you going to do?
Step one. Jump out of the car and run to class as fast as lightning.
Step two. Once you get to your classroom door, open it and unzip your bag.
Step three. Grab your drink bottle and your book bag.
Step four. Put your sparkly drink bottle on the super secret shelf.
Step five. Grab your bulging book bag. When you have done that you put it in the container.
Step six. Walk to the cloak bay and hang your face pulling bag.
Step seven. Walk back to the classroom, and get ready for work.
Those are my amazing steps.
By Mark
It is an awesome day you arrive at school.
Step one. Sprint as fast as a lion to the cloakbay. 
Step two. Take off your beautiful blue bag. 
Step three. Get your bookbag and drink bottle if you have one. 
Step four. Get into the colossal crazy classroom.
Step five. Go and get your dancing book then start writing a million words from your homework book. 
Step six. If you have time you can play.
Ring ring! The bell is ringing. So that's how you arrive at school. 
By Kenny

How to arrive at School
It is a fantastic morning, and you have arrived at school. What are you going to do next?
Step one. Open the door. If you don't go inside quietly you might hear a boom! boom! boom! when you run. 
Step two. Get your bag and put it on your hook. Get your book bag and drink bottle out of your bag.
Step three. Put your drink bottle where your friends drink bottles are. 
Step four. When you put your drink bottle away, grab your book bag and put it in the black box.
If you use these fabulous instructions to help you get ready for school, you will be an amazing IMS kid. 
By Rawinia


Tuesday, April 21, 2015

ANZAC writing

We have been learning about the soldiers from World War 1, and what it was like for them in the war. Today we wrote 'friendly letters' to our families pretending to be ANZAZ soldiers.

Dear Aunty Phoenix
How are you? I am fin, but I am very scared because I'm in the war fighting for New Zealand. There are lots of soldiers. I am in Gallipoli, which is in Turkey. The ground is very muddy like chocolate, and it's slippery like melting ice. My khaki uniform is very dirty. My feet feel like ice blocks. I can hear missiles booming very loud.
From your niece,
Sierra

Dear Stephen,
How are things going back there in our home town? Things are not going very well here in Gallipoli, Turkey. I have got a feeling that the war should never have started. there are a lot of adversaries and Allies at Gallipoli. The is barely any living grass. It is so depressing, but also good because we are saving New Zealand.
Your friend,
Callum


Did you spot any compound sentences?

Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Astronauts writing

We have been learning to write a collaborative story. We all helped to write this by sharing a document on the google drive.

The Terribly Terrific T Rex.
Once upon a time there was a dinosaur called T Rex. T Rex was very colourful and he had teeth as sharp as sharks teeth. T Rex had scales all over his body, and his scales were very rough.
One day T Rex got chased by an Ankylosaurus. He ran up a tree to escape and the Ankylosaurus tried to push over the tree by whacking it with his bony tail. T Rex was stuck! He yelled out “help!”.
All of a sudden there was a big loud thump. It was coming closer and closer crashing through the trees. It was the Ankylosaurus’ Mum. She was the tallest dinosaur in the world. She growled at the Ankylosaurus and dragged him off home wrapped up tight in her tail.
The TRex was so happy. He looked up and saw his T Rex Dad leaning over him. He sprang out of the tree and hugged his dad.
And that is how T Rex escaped from the Anylosaurus.

By The Astronauts.