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Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Instruction writing

We are learning to write instructions, and to say why we are successful.

How to arrive at school


If you want to know how to go to school you just have to listen to me.
Step one. Run as fast as a hungry lion into class.
Step two. Walk through the classroom to the cloak bay and hang your dancing bag on your hook.
Step three. Get ready for work and put your book bag away. Then your drink bottle.
Step four. Go outside and play.
Step five. When the bell rings rush into the classroom and work.
That's how you get ready for school.
By Mark
I am successful because I used language devices.

Let me tell you how to get ready for school.
1. Firstly you have to run as fast as a cheetah to the amazing class to Miss Nielsen.
2. Secondly get your books on your amazingly awesome shimmering shiny shining table.
3. Thirdly get your chair out and stick it at your table.
4. Fourthly go out and hang up you fabulous fantastic fine bag.
5. Fifthly go out and play until the roaring bell rings.
Now you know how to arrive at school.
By Katelin
I am successful today because I used alliteration

Tick, tock. Tick, tock. The clock is ticking.
Step one. Run as fast as a cheetah to the door.
Step two. Walk like a turtle to the class.
Step three. Unzip your bag and get out your book bag.
Step four. Put your book bag in the box.
Step five. Put your bag on the hook.
Step six. Go out to play.
Now you know how to arrive at school.
By Adnan

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